I returned to my last entry and edited the Wayward Son scene. I reduced the team members (not counting Anakin, Ben, Bail, and Vaness) from nine to five, clarified what their respective roles in the mission are, altered the dialogue to read more naturally, and made other various small changes to improve the scene.
Post #768045
- Author
- DuracellEnergizer
- Parent topic
- Star Wars: Knight of the Empire (The Second Episode in DuracellEnergizer's New PT Re-Write) *CANCELLED*
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/768045/action/topic#768045
- Date created
- 4-May-2015, 7:24 PM