yes it is angled way to far down in the image I posted...Yours is angled way to far back and too low.
If you were to go up in height and tilt downward and come forward a small bit you would achieve the angle in the POV cockpit shot I have been focusing on in the film.
But don't forget the sides of the cockpit is higher in the ESB cockpit and the Bars / frame are also of a totally different configuration.
The Falcon cockpit is a bit bigger in the ESB & ROTJ movies