I like what you're doing a lot.
My wife doesn't follow this sort of thing much. I watched your "opening credits" and she said, sounds like someone turned it into a 1980's TV show.
I watched the cantina draft scene and liked what I watched. The volume of the music is too loud and after a while I turned it off due to that. The intention of the clip was great but the music overpowered it so much that it undermined what you're trying to do. You're off to a great start and I think that sort of thing will be easily conquered by you.
I'm looking forward to where this goes and wish you the best in your efforts on it.