Just in case anyone's wondering why I haven't updated lately, it's because I've spent the last couple weeks revising both my Episode I re-write (hopefully for the last time) as well as this very screenplay. Now that I've finished with both, I may be posting some new material soon.

And if you're wondering what the revisions to my Ep. I script was, there was only one major one: I changed the colour of Siri's lightsaber from fuchsia to yellow. Long story short, I've decided to stick hard to the idea that only ronin Jedi and other independent Force-adepts get unique lightsaber colours. Since Siri's a member of the Order of Coruscant -- and the Coruscanti Jedi traditionally stick to blue, green, and yellow sabers -- she has to follow the crowd.