I LIKE the line when Anakin says "I miss you so much" at the grave. What it needed was context, that Lucas or SOMEONE left out of there. The extended monologue that MagFan got in there was a great context. If I was the one calling the shots and it was possible, I would have him open with the "I miss you" line and then say all the real substantive stuff. Which isn't to complain about MagFan's work or say I could do better, because I'm 99.87 percent sure I couldn't. Just tossing two cents onto the pile.
And it's really too bad there aren't any cuts around the truly, deeply love you line. Either word would be ok on it's own, but together... no one talks like that in that situation. I can see why the actors/esses often had a hard time acting "human" since the dialogue is unnatural.
And with those comments, I'll again close by saying MagFan is the MagMan. (Just sticking with the tradition of putting a good thought into poor phrasing...
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