Thanks for understanding...besides, I think it's a bit funny for Clara to be all releived when she sees Eleven, he says "hello", then cuts right to him removing the bow-tie, that optimistic look on her face drains away instantly, and then he readies for the end and boom, there you go Twelve.
It works a lot better than how I describe it...at least in my estimation
Anyhoo, I completed my take on Bells of St. John and it's up on my blog, so if you want a link to that site just pm me. There's nothing too radical about it, as all the major changes are at the beginning, but it's a nice alternative.
Now I'm currently working on The Snowmen