Color sample looks good.

I like your changes (I don't know that deleted scene, off the top of my head, though). More in line with what the SE probably should have been. I think sprucing it up for the 20th anniversary return to theaters was fine. Honestly, I'm all for changes like this or this. Obviously not at the cost of the (superior) originals never seeing the light of day again.

Personally, (and I've said similar to kk650), I find just about all of the creature (and droid) type CGI pretty detestable. So, if it were up to me, I would cut:

Dewbacks

Rontos

Tatooine scout droids

Jokey lifting robot

Sarlac beak and tentacles.

Remove Gungan celebration, as '97 version, or even all of the celebrations.

Things that I think should definitely be changed:

Vader's Noooo

Ghost Anakin.