Handman said:

So, I know it's been awhile since you last posted your work-in-progress "Introducing the Despecialized Edition", Harmy, but I do have some feedback on one thing that irks me.

When the narrator begins talking about the National Film Registry, he says, "But it was here that a problem would occur." This phrasing irks me, because it suggests that the main problem we have is that the NFR doesn't have an archival print. The problem occurred with the introduction of the 1997 SE, not the fact that the NFR doesn't have an archival print. This line could be removed entirely and get the same point across.

Thoughts?

As an English teacher, Harmy, you understand what I'm trying to get across, right? Let me know if I'm being bothersome, I know that other people try to push really stupid ideas around here.