Ahh, an illogical crossover fic containing all sorts of franchices which have very little connection to each other, in addition to lots of distracting pictures.
Basically, TL:DR
To be fair though, you did say that you wrote it in the 6th grade. If you still write fanfiction, it is probably more professional and readable now :P
I'm not saying crossover fic is bad. In fact, I was thinking of writing a script-fic crossover myself involving Magic School Bus and Doctor Who. (I posted the first "episode" a couple months ago. It was to be a finale to MSB, leading to a series fic involving a regenerated Frizzle doing her best to avoid the Time War but getting pulled in anyway. I removed it because 1. I felt the quality was poor. 2. It had the framing device of a Lost Episode Creepypasta, which I feel isn't really necessary. 3. I want to start from scratch. 4. I need to rewatch and watch those shows (respectively) so that it can be more accurate with both franchises. 5. By making it a script fic instead of prose, I could include details that I couldn't otherwise without making things spoilers.)
Back on-topic. I haven't gotten a reply from any of the three groups yet.