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darth_ender
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The Star Wars: The Lost Workprint (* unfinished project - lots of info *)
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8-Nov-2014, 5:03 PM

     "Nope, not yet," Biggs told the others. "Hold on, Luke. I'll  be  right

there."

     A thin, mechanical voice sounded over the speakers.  "Hang  on,  Artoo,

hang on!" Back at the temple headquarters, Threepio  turned  away  from  the

curious human faces which had turned to stare at him.

     As Luke soared high above the station another X-wing swung in close  to

him. He recognized Wedge's ship and began hunting around anxiously  for  his

friend.

     "We're goin' in, Biggs-join up. Biggs, are you all right? Biggs!" There

was no sign of the other fighter. "Wedge, do you see him anywhere?"

     Within the transparent canopy  of  the  fighter  bobbing  close  by,  a

helmeted head shook slowly. "Nothing," Wedge told him over the communicator.

"Wait a little longer. He'll show."

     Luke looked around, worried, studied several instruments, then came  to

a decision. "We can't wait; we've got to go now. I don't think he made it."

     "Hey, you guys," a cheerful voice  demanded  to  know,  "what  are  you

waiting for?"

     Luke turned sharply to his right, in time to see  another  ship  racing

past and slowing slightly ahead of him. "Don't ever give up on  old  Biggs,"

the intercom directed as the figure in the X-wing ahead looked back at them.

 

     Within the central control  room  of  the  battle  station,  a  harried

officer rushed up to a figure studying the great battle screen and  waved  a

handful of printouts at him.

     "Sir, we've completed an analysis of their  attack  plan.  There  is  a

danger. Should we break off the engagement or make plans to  evacuate?  Your

ship is standing by."

     Governor Tarkin turned an incredulous gaze on the officer,  who  shrank

back. "Evacuate!" he roared. "At our moment of  triumph?  We  are  about  to

destroy the last remnants of the Alliance, and you call for evacuation?  You

overestimate their chances badly... Now, get out!"

     Overwhelmed by the Governor's fury,  the  subdued  officer  turned  and

retreated from the room.

 

     "We're going in," Luke declared as he commenced  his  dive  toward  the

surface. Wedge and Biggs followed just aft.

     "Let's go-Luke," a voice he had heard before sounded inside  his  head.

Again he tapped his helmet and looked around. It sounded as if  the  speaker

were standing just behind him. But there was nothing, only silent metal  and

nonverbal instrumentation. Puzzled, Luke turned back to his controls.

     Once more, energy bolts reached out for  them,  passing  harmlessly  on

both sides as the surface of the battle station charged up  into  his  face.

But the defensive fire wasn't  the  cause  of  the  renewed  trembling  Luke

suddenly experienced. Several critical gauges  were  beginning  their  swing

back into the danger zone again.

     He leaned toward the pickup. "Artoo, those  stabilizing  elements  must

have broken loose again. See if you can't lock it back down-I've got to have

full control."

     Ignoring the bumpy ride, the energy beams and explosions lighting space

around him, the little robot moved to repair the damage.

     Additional, tireless explosions continued to buffet the three  fighters

as they dropped into the trench. Biggs and Wedge dropped behind to cover for

Luke as he reached to pull down the targeting visor.

     For the second time a peculiar hesitation swept through him.  His  hand

was slower yet as he finally pulled the device down in front  of  his  eyes,

almost as if the nerves were in conflict with one another. As expected,  the

energy beams stopped as if on signal and he was barreling  down  the  trench

unchallenged.

     "Here we go  again,"  Wedge  declared  as  he  spotted  three  Imperial

fighters dropping down on them.

     Biggs and Wedge began crossing behind Luke, trying to draw  the  coming

fire away from him and confuse their pursuers. One TIE fighter  ignored  the

maneuvers, continuing to gain inexorably on the rebel ships.

     Luke stared into the targeting device-then reached up slowly to move it

aside. For a long minute he pondered the deactivated instrument, staring  at

it as if hypnotized. Then he slid it sharply back in front of his  face  and

studied the tiny screen as it displayed the  shifting  relationship  of  the

X-wing to the nearing exhaust port.

     "Hurry, Luke," Biggs called out as he wrenched  his  ship  in  time  to

narrowly avoid a powerful beam. They're coming in faster this time. We can't

hold them much longer."

     With inhuman precision, Darth Vader depressed the fire control  of  his

fighter again. A loud, desperate shout sounded over the  speakers,  blending

into a final agonized scream of flesh and metal  as  Biggs's  fighter  burst

into a billion glowing splinters that rained  down  on  the  bottom  of  the

trench.

     Wedge heard the explosion over  his  speakers  and  hunted  frantically

behind him for the trailing enemy ships. "We lost Biggs," he  yelled  toward

his own pickup.

     Luke didn't reply immediately. His eyes were watering, and  he  angrily

wiped them clear. They were blurring his view of the targeting readout.

     "We're a couple of shooting stars, Biggs," he whispered  huskily,  "and

we'll never be stopped." His ship rocked slightly from a near  miss  and  he

directed his words to his remaining wingman, biting down hard on the end  of

each sentence.

     "Close it up, Wedge. You can't do any more good back there. Artoo,  try

to give me a little more power on our rear reflectors."

     The Artoo unit hurried to comply as Wedge pulled  up  alongside  Luke's

ship. The trailing TIE fighters also increased their speed.

     "I'm on the leader," Vader informed his soldiers. "Take the other one."

     Luke flew just in front of Wedge, slightly to port side.  Energy  bolts

from the pursuing Imperials began to  streak  close  about  them.  Both  men

crossed each other's path repeatedly, striving to  present  as  confusing  a

target as possible.

     Wedge was fighting with his controls when  several  small  flashes  and

sparks lit his control board. One small panel exploded, leaving molten  slag

behind. Somehow he managed to retain control of the ship.

     "I've got a bad malfunction, Luke. I can't stay with you."

     "Okay, Wedge, get clear."

     Wedge mumbled a heartfelt "Sorry" and peeled up out of the trench.

     Vader, concentrating his attention on the  one  ship  remaining  before

him, fired.

     Luke didn't see the near-lethal explosion which burst close behind him.

Nor did he have time to examine the smoking shell of twisted metal which now

rode alongside one engine. The arms went limp on the little droid.

 

     All three TIE fighters continued to chase the remaining X-wing down the

trench. It was only a matter of  moments  before  one  of  them  caught  the

bobbing fighter with a crippling burst.  Except  now  there  were  only  two

Imperials  pursuing.  The  third  had  become  an  expanding   cylinder   of

decomposing debris, bits and pieces of which slammed into the walls  of  the

canyon.

     Vader's remaining wingman looked around in panic for the source of  the

attack. The same distortion fields that confused rebel  instrumentation  now

did likewise to the two TIE fighters.

     Only when the freighter fully eclipsed the  sun  forward  did  the  new

threat become visible. It was a Corellian transport,  far  larger  than  any

fighter, and it was diving directly  at  the  trench.  But  it  didn't  move

precisely like a freighter, somehow.

     Whoever was piloting that vehicle must have been unconscious or out  of

his mind, the wingman decided. Wildly he adjusted controls in an attempt  to

avoid the anticipated collision. The freighter swept by just  overhead,  but

in missing it the wingman slid too far to one side.

     A small explosion followed as two huge  fins  of  the  paralleling  TIE

fighters intersected. Screaming uselessly into  his  pickup,  the  wing  man

fluttered toward the near  trench  wall.  He  never  touched  it,  his  ship

erupting in flame before contact.

     To the other side, Darth Vader's  fighter  began  spinning  helplessly.

Unimpressed by the  Dark  Lord's  desperate  glower,  various  controls  and

instruments gave back readings which were brutally truthful. Completely  out

of control, the tiny ship continued spinning in the opposite direction  from

the destroyed wingman-out into the endless reaches of deep space.

 

     Whoever was at  the  controls  of  the  supple  freighter  was  neither

unconscious nor insane-well, perhaps slightly touched, but fully in  command

nonetheless. It soared high above the trench, turning  to  run  protectively

above Luke.

     "You're all clear now, kid," a familiar voice informed him.  "Now  blow

this thing so we can all go home."

     This pep talk was followed by a reinforcing grunt which could only have

been produced by a particularly large Wookiee.

     Luke looked up through the canopy and smiled. But his smile faded as he

turned back to the targeting visor. There was a tickling inside his head.

     "Luke...trust me," the tickle requested, forming words  for  the  third

time. He stared into the targeter. The emergency exhaust  port  was  sliding

toward the firing circle again, as it had once before-when he'd  missed.  He

hesitated, but only briefly this time,  then  shoved  the  targeting  screen

aside. Closing his eyes, he appeared to mumble to himself, as if in internal

conversation with something unseen. With the confidence of a  blind  man  in

familiar surroundings, Luke  moved  a  thumb  over  several  controls,  then

touched one. Soon after, a concerned voice filled the cockpit from the  open

speakers.

     "Base One to Blue Five, your targeting device is switched  off.  What's

wrong?"

     "Nothing," Luke murmured, barely audible. "Nothing."

     He blinked and cleared his eyes. Had he been asleep? Looking around, he

saw that he was out of the trench and  shooting  back  into  open  space.  A

glance outside showed the familiar shape of Han Solo's ship  shadowing  him.

Another, at the control board, indicated that he had released his  remaining

torpedoes, although he couldn't remember touching the firing stud. Still, he

must have.

     The cockpit speakers were alive with excitement. "You did it!  You  did

it!" Wedge was shouting over and over. "I think they went right in."

     "Good shot kid." Solo complimented him, having to raise his voice to be

heard over Chewbacca's unrestrained howling.

     Distant, muted rumblings  shook  Luke's  ship,  an  omen  of  incipient

success. He must have fired the torpedoes, mustn't he? Gradually he regained

his composure.

     "Glad... you were here to see it. Now let's get some  distance  between

us and that thing before it goes. I hope Wedge was right."

     Several  X-wings,   Y-wings,   and   one   battered-looking   freighter

accelerated away from the battle station, racing toward the distant curve of

Yavin.

     Behind them small flashes of fading light marked the receding  station.

Without warning, something appeared in the sky in  place  of  it  which  was

brighter than the glowing gas giant, brighter than its far-off  sun.  For  a

few seconds the eternal night became day. No one dared look directly at  it.

Not even multiple shields set on high could dim that awesome flare.

     Space filled temporarily with trillions of microscopic metal fragments,

propelled past the retreating ships by  the  liberated  energy  of  a  small

artificial sun. The collapsed residue of the battle station  would  continue

to consume itself for several days, forming for that brief span of time  the

most impressive tombstone in this corner of the cosmos.