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darth_ender
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The Star Wars: The Lost Workprint (* unfinished project - lots of info *)
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8-Nov-2014, 5:02 PM

     "Red Five to Blue Leader," he reported. "Aborting run under heavy fire.

TIE fighters dropped on us out of nowhere. I can't-wait-"

     Astern, a silent, remorseless enemy was touching a deadly  button  once

more. The first bolts struck just as Pops had risen high enough to  commence

evasive action. But he had pulled clear a few seconds too late.

     One energy beam seared his port engine, igniting gas within. The engine

blew apart, taking controls and stabilizing  elements  with  it.  Unable  to

compensate, the out-of-control Y- wing began a long, graceful plunge  toward

the station surface.

     "Are you all right,  Red  Five?"  a  troubled  voice  called  over  the

intership system.

     "Lost Tiree... lost Dutch," Pops explained slowly, tiredly. "They  drop

in behind you, and you can't maneuver in the trench. Sorry... it's your baby

now. So long, Dave-"

     It was the last message of many from a veteran.

     Blue Leader forced a crispness he didn't feel  into  his  voice  as  he

tried to shunt aside the death of his old friend. "Blue boys, this  is  Blue

Leader. Rendezvous at mark six point one. All wings report in."

     "Blue Leader, this is Blue Ten. I copy."

     "Blue Two here," Wedge acknowledged. "Coming toward you, Blue Leader."

     Luke was also waiting his turn to report when something beeped  on  his

control board. A glance backward confirmed  the  electronic  warning  as  he

spotted an Imperial fighter slipping in behind him.

     "This is Blue Five," he declared, his ship wobbling as he tried to lose

the TIE fighter. "I have a problem here. Be right with you."

     He sent his ship into a steep dive toward the metal surface,  then  cut

sharply up to avoid a burst  of  defensive  fire  from  emplacements  below.

Neither maneuver shook his pursuit.

     "I see you, Luke," came a reassuring call from Biggs. "Stay with it."

     Luke looked above, below, and to the sides, but there was  no  sign  of

his friend. Meanwhile, energy bolts from his trailing assailant were passing

uncomfortably close.

     "Blast it, Biggs, where are you?"

     Something appeared, not to the sides or behind, but almost directly  in

front of him. It was bright and moving incredibly  fast,  and  then  it  was

firing just above him. Taken completely by surprise,  the  Imperial  fighter

came apart just as its pilot realized what had happened.

     Luke turned for the rendezvous mark as Biggs shot past overhead.  "Good

move, Biggs. Fooled me, too."

     "I'm just getting started," his friend announced as he twisted his ship

violently to avoid the fire from  below.  He  hove  into  view  over  Luke's

shoulder and executed a victory roll. "Just point me at the target."

     Back alongside Yavin's indifferent bulk, Dodonna  finished  an  intense

discussion with several  of  his  principal  advisors,  then  moved  to  the

long-range transmitter.

     "Blue Leader, this is Base One. Double-check your own attack  prior  to

commencement. Have your wingmen hold back and cover for you. Keep half  your

group out of range to make the next run."

     "Copy, Base One," the response came. "Blue Ten, Blue Twelve, join  with

me."

     Two ships leveled off to flank  the  squadron  commander.  Blue  Leader

checked them out. Satisfied that  they  were  positioned  properly  for  the

attack run, he set the group to follow in case they should fail.

     "Blue Five, this is Blue Leader, Luke, take Blue  Two  and  Three  with

you. Hold up here out of their fire and wait for my signal to start your own

run."

     "Copy, Blue Leader,"  Luke  acknowledged,  trying  to  slow  his  heart

slightly. "May the force be with you. Biggs,  Wedge,  let's  close  it  up."

Together, the three fighters  assumed  a  tight  formation  high  above  the

firefight still raging  between  other  rebel  craft  of  Green  and  Yellow

squadrons and the imperial gunners below.

     The horizon flip-flopped ahead of  Blue  Leader  as  he  commenced  his

approach to the station surface. "Blue Ten, Blue Twelve, stay back until  we

spot those fighters, then cover me."

     All three X-wings reached the surface, leveled off, then arced into the

trench. His wingmen dropped farther and farther behind until Blue Leader was

seemingly alone in the vast gray chasm.

     No defensive fire greeted him as he raced toward the distant target. He

found himself looking around nervously, checking  and  rechecking  the  same

instruments.

     "This doesn't look right," he found himself muttering.

     Blue Ten sounded equally concerned. "You should be able to pick up  the

target by now."

     "I  know.  The  disruption  down  here  is  unbelievable.  I  think  my

instruments are off. Is this the right trench?"

     Suddenly, intense streaks of light began  to  shoot  close  by  as  the

trench defenses opened up. Near misses shook the attackers. At the  far  end

of the trench a huge tower dominated  the  metal  ridge,  vomiting  enormous

amounts of energy at the nearing ships.

     "It's not going to be easy with  that  tower  up  there,"  Blue  Leader

declared grimly. "Stand by to close up a little when I tell you."

     Abruptly the energy bolts ceased and all was silent  and  dark  in  the

trench once again. "This is it," Blue Leader announced, trying to locate the

attack from above that had to be coming. "Keep  your  eyes  open  for  those

fighters."

     "All short-  and  long-range  scopes  are  blank,"  Blue  Ten  reported

tensely. "Too much interference here. Blue Five, can you see them from where

you are?"

     Luke's attention was riveted to the surface of the  station.  "No  sign

of-Wait!" Three rapidly moving points of light caught his eye.  "There  they

are. Coming in point three five."

     Blue Ten turned and looked in the indicated direction. Sun bounced  off

stabilizing fins as the TIE fighters looped downward. "I see them."

     "It's the right trench,  all  right,"  Blue  Leader  exclaimed  as  his

tracking scope suddenly began a steady beeping. He  adjusted  his  targeting

instrumentation, pulling his visor down over his eyes. "I'm almost in range.

Targets ready... coming up. Just hold them off me for a few seconds-keep 'em

busy."

     But Darth Vader was already setting his own fire control as he  dropped

like a stone toward the trench. "Close up  the  formation.  I'll  take  them

myself."

     Blue Twelve went first, both  engines  blown.  A  slight  deviation  in

flight path and his ship slammed into the trench wall. Blue Ten  slowed  and

accelerated, bobbed drunkenly, but could do little within  the  confines  of

those metal walls.

     "I can't hold  them  long.  You'd  better  fire  while  you  can,  Blue

Leader-we're closing on you."

     The squadron commander was wholly absorbed in  lining  up  two  circles

within his targeting visor. "We're almost home. Steady, steady..."

     Blue Ten glanced around frantically. "They're right behind me!"

     Blue Leader was amazed at how calm he was.  The  targeting  device  was

partly responsible, enabling him to concentrate on tiny, abstract images  to

the exclusion of all else, helping him to shut out the rest of the  inimical

universe.

     "Almost there, almost there..." he  whispered.  Then  the  two  circles

matched, turned red, and a steady buzzing sounded in his helmet.  "Torpedoes

away, torpedoes away."

     Immediately after, Blue Ten let his own missiles loose.  Both  fighters

pulled up sharply, just clearing the end of the trench as several explosions

billowed in their wake.

     "It's a hit! We've done it!" Blue Ten shouted hysterically.

     Blue Leader's reply was thick with  disappointment.  "No,  we  haven't.

They didn't go in. They just exploded on the surface outside the shaft."

     Disappointment killed them, too, as  they  neglected  to  watch  behind

them. Three pursuing Imperial fighters continued up out of the fading  light

from the torpedo explosions. Blue Ten fell to Vader's precision  fire,  then

the Dark Lord changed  course  slightly  to  fall  in  behind  the  squadron

commander.

     "I'll take the last one," he announced coldly. "You two go back."

     Luke was trying to pick the assault team out of the glowing gases below

when Blue Leader's voice sounded over the communicator.

     "Blue Five, this is Blue Leader. Move into position, Luke.  Start  your

attack run-stay low and wait until you're right on top of it. It's not going

to be easy."

     "Are you all right?"

     "They're on top of me-but I'll shake them."