logo Sign In

Post #734877

Author
darth_ender
Parent topic
The Star Wars: The Lost Workprint (* unfinished project - lots of info *)
Link to post in topic
https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/734877/action/topic#734877
Date created
8-Nov-2014, 5:01 PM

On the battle station, troopers worn half to death or deafened  by  the

concussion of the big guns were replaced by fresh crews. None  of  them  had

time to wonder how the battle was going, and at the moment none of them much

cared, a malady shared by common soldiers since the dawn of history.

     Luke skimmed daringly low over the  station's  surface,  his  attention

riveted on a distant metal projection.

     "Stick close, Blue Five," the squadron commander directed  him.  "Where

are you going?"

     "I've picked up what looks like a lateral  stabilizer,"  Luke  replied.

"I'm going to try for it."

     "Watch yourself, Blue Five. Heavy fire in your area."

     Luke ignored the warning as he headed the fighter straight  toward  the

oddly shaped  protuberance.  His  determination  was  rewarded  when,  after

saturating it with fire, he saw it erupt in a spectacular ball  of  superhot

gas.

     "Got it!" he exclaimed. "Continuing south for another one."

     Within the rebel temple-fortress, Leia listened  intently.  She  seemed

simultaneously angry and frightened. Finally  she  turned  to  Threepio  and

muttered, "Why is Luke taking so many chances?" The tall droid didn't reply.

     "Watch your back, Luke,"  Biggs's  voice  sounded  over  the  speakers,

"watch your back! Fighters above you, coming in."

     Leia strained to see what she could only hear. She wasn't alone.  "Help

him, Artoo," Threepio was whispering to himself, "and keep holding on."

     Luke continued his dive even as he looked back and spotted  the  object

of Biggs's concern close on his tail. Reluctantly he pulled up and away from

the station surface, abandoning his target. His tormentor was good, however,

and continued closing on him.

     "I can't shake him," he reported.

     Something cut across the sky toward both ships.  "I'm  on  him,  Luke,"

shouted Wedge Antilles. "Hold on."

     Luke didn't have to for very long. Wedge's gunnery was precise, and the

TIE fighter vanished brightly shortly thereafter.

     "Thanks, Wedge," Luke murmured, breathing a little more easily.

     "Good shooting, Wedge." That was Biggs again. "Blue Four, I'm going in.

Cover me, Porkins."

     "I'm right with you, Blue Three," came the other pilot's assurance.

     Biggs leveled them off, then let go with full  weaponry.  No  one  ever

decided exactly what it was he hit, but the small tower that blew  up  under

his energy bolts was obviously more important than it looked.

     A series of sequential explosions hopscotched across a large section of

the battle station's surface, leaping from one terminal to the  next.  Biggs

had already shot past the area of disturbance, but his companion,  following

slightly behind, received a full dose of whatever energy  was  running  wild

down there.

     "I've got a problem," Porkins announced. "My converter's running wild."

That was an understatement. Every  instrument  on  his  control  panels  had

abruptly gone berserk.

     "Eject-eject, Blue Four," advised Biggs. "Blue Four, do you read?"

     "I'm okay," Porkins replied. "I can hold her. Give me a little room  to

run, Biggs."

     "You're too low," his companion yelled. "Pull up, pull up!"

     With his instrumentation not providing proper information, and  at  the

altitude he was traveling, Porkins's ship was simple for  one  of  the  big,

clumsy gun emplacements to track. It did as its designers  had  intended  it

should. Porkins's demise was as glorious as it was abrupt.

     It was comparatively quiet near the pole  of  the  battle  station.  So

intense and vicious had been  Blue  and  Green  squadron's  assault  on  the

equator that Imperial resistance had concentrated there. Red Leader surveyed

the false peace with mournful satisfaction, knowing  it  wouldn't  last  for

long.

     "Blue Leader, this is Red Leader," he announced into his  mike.  "We're

starting our attack run. The exhaust port is located and marked. No flak, no

enemy fighters up here-yet. Looks like we'll get at least one smooth run  at

it."

     "I copy, Red Leader," the voice of his  counterpart  responded.  "We'll

try to keep them busy down here."

     Three Y-wing fighters dropped out  of  the  stars,  diving  toward  the

battle-station surface. At the last possible minute they swerved to dip into

a deep artificial canyon, one of many streaking the  northern  pole  of  the

Death Star. Metal ramparts raced past on three sides of them.

     Red Leader hunted around, noticed the  temporary  absence  of  Imperial

fighters. He adjusted a control and addressed his squadron.

     "This is it, boys. Remember, when you think you're close, go in  closer

before you drop that rock. Switch all power to front deflector screens-never

mind what they throw at you from the side. We can't worry about that now."

     Imperial crews lining the trench rudely awoke to the  fact  that  their

heretofore ignored section of the station  was  coming  under  attack.  They

reacted speedily, and soon energy bolts were racing at the  attacking  ships

in a steadily increasing volume. Occasionally one would explode near one  of

the onrushing Y- wings, jostling it without real damage.

     "A little aggressive, aren't they," Red Two reported over his mike.

     Red Leader reacted quietly. "How many guns do you think, Red Five?"

     Red Five, known casually to most of the rebel pilots as  Pops,  somehow

managed to make an estimate of the trench's  defenses  while  simultaneously

piloting his fighter through the  growing  hail  of  fire.  His  helmet  was

battered almost to the point of uselessness from the effects of more battles

than anyone had a right to survive.

     "I'd say about twenty emplacements," he finally decided, "some  in  the

surface and some on the towers."

     Red Leader acknowledged the information with a grunt as he  pulled  his

computer-targeting visor down in front of his face. Explosions continued  to

rock the fighter. "Switch to targeting computers," he declared.

     "Red Two," came one reply,  "computer  locked  in  and  I'm  getting  a

signal." The young pilot's rising excitement marked his reply.

     But the senior pilot among all the rebels, Red  Five,  was  expectantly

cool and confident-though it didn't sound like it from what he murmured half

to himself: "No doubt about it, this is going to be some trick."

     Unexpectedly, all defensive  fire  from  the  surrounding  emplacements

ceased. An eerie quiet clung to the trench as the surface continued to  blur

past the skimming Y-wings.

     "What's  this?"  Red  Two  blurted,  looking  around  worriedly.  "They

stopped. Why?"

     "I don't like it," growled Red Leader. But there was nothing to confuse

their approach now, no energy bolts to avoid.

     It was Pops who was first to properly evaluate this seeming  aberration

on the enemy's part. "Stabilize your rear deflectors now.  Watch  for  enemy

fighters."

     "You pinned it, Pops," Red Leader admitted, studying a  readout.  "Here

they come. Three marks at two-ten."

     A mechanical voice continued to recite the shrinking distance to  their

target, but it wasn't shrinking  fast  enough.  "We're  sitting  ducks  down

here," he observed nervously.

     "We'll just have to ride it out," the old man told them all. "We  can't

defend ourselves and go for the target at the same time." He fought down old

reflexes as  his  own  screen  revealed  three  TIE  fighters  in  precision

formation diving almost vertically down toward them.

     "Three-eight-one-oh-four," Darth Vader announced as he calmly  adjusted

his controls. The stars whipped past behind him.  "I'll  take  them  myself.

Cover me."

     Red Two was the first to die, the young pilot never  knowing  what  hit

him, never seeing his executioner. Despite his experience, Red Leader was on

the verge of panic when he saw his wingman dissolve in flame.

     "We're trapped down here. No  way  to  maneuver-trench  walls  are  too

close. We've got to loosen it up somehow. Got-"

     "Stay on target," admonished an older voice. "Stay on target."

     Red Leader took Pops's words like tonic, but it was all he could do  to

ignore the closing TIE fighters as the two remaining  Y-wings  continued  to

streak toward the target.

     Above them, Vader permitted himself a moment of undisciplined  pleasure

as he readjusted his targeting 'puter. The rebel craft continued to travel a

straight, unevasive course. Again Vader touched finger to fire control.

     Something screeched in Red Leader's helmet, and fire started to consume

his instrumentation. "It's no good," he yelled into his  pickup,  "I'm  hit.

I'm hit...!"

     A second Y-wing exploded in a ball of vaporized metal, scattering a few

solid shards of debris across the trench. This second loss proved  too  much

even for Red Five to take. He manipulated controls, and his  ship  commenced

rising in a slow curve out of the trench.  Behind  him,  the  lead  Imperial

fighter moved to follow.