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darth_ender
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The Star Wars: The Lost Workprint (* unfinished project - lots of info *)
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8-Nov-2014, 5:01 PM

     "I got a little toasted, but I'm okay."

     A different, stern voice sounded.  "Blue  Five,"  warned  the  squadron

leader, "you'd better give yourself  more  lead  time  or  you're  going  to

destroy yourself as well as the Imperial construction."

     "Yes, sir. I've got the hang of it now. Like you said, it's not exactly

like flying a sky hopper."

     Energy bolts and sun-bright beams continued to create a chromatic  maze

in the space above the station as the rebel fighters crisscrossed  back  and

forth over its surface, firing at whatever looked like a decent target.  Two

of the tiny craft concentrated on a power terminal.  It  blew  up,  throwing

lightning-sized electric arcs from the station's innards.

     Inside,  troopers,  mechanicals,  and  equipment  were  blown  in   all

directions by subsidiary explosions as the effects  of  the  blast  traveled

back down various conduits and cables. Where the explosion  had  hulled  the

station, escaping atmosphere sucked helpless soldiers and droids out into  a

bottomless black tomb.

     Moving from position to position, a figure of dark calm amid the chaos,

was Darth  Vader.  A  harried  Commander  rushed  up  to  him  and  reported

breathlessly.

     "Lord Vader, we count at least thirty of them, of two types.  They  are

so small and quick the  fixed  guns  cannot  follow  them  accurately.  They

continuously evade the predictors."

     "Get all TIE crews to their fighters. We'll have to go out  after  them

and destroy them ship by ship."

     Within numerous hangars red lights  began  flashing  and  an  insistent

alarm started to ring. Ground crews worked frantically  to  ready  ships  as

flight-suited Imperial pilots grabbed for helmets and packs.

     "Luke," requested Blue Leader as he skimmed smoothly through a rain  of

fire, "let me know when you're off the block."

     "I'm on my way now."

     "Watch yourself," the voice urged over the cockpit speaker. "There's  a

lot of fire coming from the starboard side of that deflection tower."

     "I'm on it, don't  worry,"  Luke  responded  confidently.  Putting  his

fighter into a twisting dive, he sliced once  more  across  metal  horizons.

Antennae and small protruding emplacements burst into  transitory  flame  as

bolts from his wing tips struck with deadly accuracy.

     He grinned as he pulled up and away from the surface as  intense  lines

of energy passed through space recently vacated. Darned if  it  wasn't  like

hunting womp-rats back home in the crumbling canyons of Tatooine's wastes.

     Biggs followed Luke on a similar run, even as Imperial pilots  prepared

to lift clear of the station. Within the many docking bays  technical  crews

rushed hurriedly to unlock power cables and conclude desperate final checks.

     More care was taken in preparing a particular craft nearest one of  the

bay ports, the one into which Darth Vader barely succeeded in squeezing  his

huge frame. Once set in the seat he slid a second set of eye shields  across

his face.

     The atmosphere of the war room back in the temple was  one  of  nervous

expectancy. Occasional blinks and buzzes from the main battle screen sounded

louder than the soft sussuration of hopeful people trying  to  reassure  one

another. Near a far corner of the mass of  flickering  lights  a  technician

leaned a little closer to his own readouts before speaking into  the  pickup

suspended near his mouth.

     "Squad leaders-attention; squad leaders-attention! We've  picked  up  a

new set of signals from the other side of the station. Enemy fighters coming

your way."

     Luke received the report at the same time as everyone  else.  He  began

hunting the sky for the predicted Imperial craft, his gaze dropping  to  his

instrumentation. "My scope's negative. I don't see anything."

     "Maintain visual scanning," Blue Leader directed. "With all this energy

flying, they'll be on top of  you  before  your  scope  can  pick  them  up.

Remember, they can jam every instrument on your ship except your eyes."

     Luke turned again, and this time saw an Imperial  already  pursuing  an

X-wing-an X-wing with a number Luke quickly recognized.

     "Biggs!" he shouted. "You've picked one up. On your tail... watch it!"

     "I can't see it," came his friend's panicked response. "Where is he?  I

can't see it."

     Luke watched helplessly as Biggs's ship  shot  away  from  the  station

surface and out into clear space, closely  followed  by  the  Imperial.  The

enemy vessel fired steadily at him, each successive bolt seeming to  pass  a

little closer to Biggs's hull.

     "He's on me tight," the voice sounded in Luke's cockpit. "I can't shake

him."

     Twisting, spinning, Biggs looped back toward the  battle  station,  but

the pilot trailing him was persistent and showed no  sign  of  relinquishing

pursuit.

     "Hang on, Biggs," Luke called, wrenching his  ship  around  so  steeply

that straining gyros whined. "I'm coming in."

     So absorbed in his pursuit of Biggs was  the  Imperial  pilot  that  he

didn't see Luke, who rotated his own ship, flipped  out  of  the  concealing

gray below and dropped in behind him.

     Electronic  crosshairs  lined  up  according  to  the  computer-readout

instructions, and Luke fired repeatedly. There  was  a  small  explosion  in

space-tiny compared  with  the  enormous  energies  being  put  out  by  the

emplacements on the surface of the battle station. But the explosion was  of

particular  significance  to  three   people:   Luke,   Biggs,   and,   most

particularly, to the pilot of the TIE fighter, who was  vaporized  with  his

ship.

     "Got him!" Luke murmured.

     "I've got one! I've got one!" came a less  restrained  cry  of  triumph

over the open intercom. Luke identified the voice as belonging  to  a  young

pilot known as John D. Yes, that  was  Blue  Six  chasing  another  Imperial

fighter across the metal landscape. Bolts jumped from the X-wing  in  steady

succession until the TIE fighter blew in half, sending  leaflike  glittering

metal fragments flying in all directions.

     "Good shooting, Blue Six," the squadron leader commented. Then he added

quickly, "Watch out, you've got one on your tail."

     Within the fighter's cockpit the gleeful smile on the young man's  face

vanished instantly  as  he  looked  around,  unable  to  spot  his  pursuer.

Something flared brightly nearby, so close that his  starboard  port  burst.

Then something hit even closer and the interior  of  the  now  open  cockpit

became a mass of flames.

     "I'm hit, I'm hit!"

     That was all he had time  to  scream  before  oblivion  took  him  from

behind. Far above and to one side Blue Leader saw John D.'s ship expand in a

fiery ball. His lips may have whitened slightly. Otherwise he might as  well

never have seen the X-wing explode, for all the reaction  he  displayed.  He

had more important things to do.

     On the fourth moon of Yavin a spacious  screen  chose  that  moment  to

flicker and die, much as John D. had. Worried technicians began  rushing  in

all directions. One turned a drawn face to Leia, the  expectant  Commanders,

and one tall, bronzed robot.

     "The high-band receiver has failed. It will take some time to fix..."

     "Do the best you can," Leia snapped. "Switch to audio only."

     Someone overheard, and in seconds the room was filled with  the  sounds

of distant battle, interspersed with the voices of those involved.

     "Tighten it up, Blue Two, tighten  it  up,"  Blue  Leader  was  saying.

"Watch those towers."

     "Heavy fire, Boss," came the voice  of  Wedge  Antilles,  "twenty-three

degrees."

     "I see it. Pull in, pull in. We're picking up some interference."

     "I can't believe it," Biggs  was  stammering.  "I've  never  seen  such

firepower!"

     "Pull in, Blue Five. Pull in." A pause, then, "Luke, do  you  read  me?

Luke?"

     "I'm all right, Chief," came Luke's reply.  "I've  got  a  target.  I'm

going to check it out."

     "There's too much action down there, Luke," Biggs told him.  "Get  out.

Do you read me, Luke? Pull out."

     "Break off, Luke," ordered the deeper tones of Blue Leader. "We've  hit

too much interference here. Luke, I repeat, break off! I can't see him. Blue

Two, can you see Blue Five?"

     "Negative," Wedge replied  quickly.  "There's  a  fire  zone  here  you

wouldn't believe. My scanner's jammed. Blue Five, where are you?  Luke,  are

you all right?"

     "He's gone," Biggs started to report solemnly.  Then  his  voice  rose.

"No, wait... there he is! Looks like a little  fin  damage,  but  the  kid's

fine."

     Relief swept the war room, and it was most noticeable in  the  face  of

the slightest, most beautiful Senator present.