RicOlie_2 said:

Tyrphanax said:

When Obi-Wan falls down the shaft defeated, take a moment to have Qui-Gon (who we know transcended into the Force) communicate with Obi-Wan, to remember his training, that he believes in him, and that the Force will be with him, always (more poetry).

Unexpected plot twist!

Obi-Wan goes down the shaft first, remember.

TV's Frink said:

Tyrphanax said:

After Qui-Gon dies I would have included Maul taunting Obi-Wan about how he skewered Qui-Gon like a helpless child, have him portend the fall of the Republic down the shaft.

Fixed?

Oops, thanks.