TV's Frink said:
oh_riginal said:
TV's Frink said:
This is an idea I've had for a long time, but it ended up much more difficult than I was expecting...and thus I'm not 100% sure it works. But I'll let y'all be the judge.
First impression: I get what you're going for, but it feels like it could go further, with a better song. Unfortunately I don't have any ideas for one off the top of my head.
Can you be more specific about how it could go further? The song is the whole point of that bit, so the song choice is the one thing I'm not unsure about. I can think of multiple issues with the implementation, however, so what is it that bothers you?
I'm not sure. Maybe it just feels like it could be even funnier with a different song choice, but definitely with the same type of topic. If there was something that sounded like it didn't fit the tone even less, yet with the same topic, it might be better.
I'm a bit frustrated in trying to figure out how to pinpoint what I'm thinking, but I'll get back to you if it hits me....