Your edits are fantastic, and are a great example of how far a fan edit can be taken. If you have any other clips that weren't posted, I'd love to see them.
On another note, have any thoughts on removing scenes of Palpatine using his lightsaber? Personally, I believe it is as outrageous as Yoda using a light saber. I'm not sure if there is enough footage left over at that point to connect the dots of the narrative, but I'm wondering what the possibilities are.