A more tortured protagonist, Anakin being a bit whiny is fine but he needed some actual damage and turmoil in his life for his turn to the dark to be a bit more convincing when he eventually turned.
Maybe either ad-lib some of the dialogue or re-write it to feel more natural, the conversations between characters (especially between Anakin and Padme) never seems like something actual people would say.
Post #725252
- Author
- Gogogadget
- Parent topic
- What would have made the prequels better in your opinion?
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- Date created
- 30-Aug-2014, 7:58 PM