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Post #724781

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Ronster
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Possessed Return of the Jedi-* Resurrected!!*
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Date created
28-Aug-2014, 7:08 AM

Possessed said:

Sorry for the triple post, but here's the mock up:

https://vimeo.com/89937415

Keep in mind that it is very rough, meant to show only how the ideas work.  The edits are rough, the timing of the edits are rough, and obviously I need to work out another solution for how to actually end the scene.  (Opinions?)

(Perhaps after Ackbar announces that lando is leading I should find a way to fill in a few seconds so that it registers with our viewers that the briefing is over, and THEN insert the dialogue where han says "well, look at you, a general huh?".  I'd have to do some tweaking to the video there, because it would look very odd to have han sit down, stand up, then sit back down again.)

Also, GOUT video is used only because I was in a hurry to do this very quickly and that was the video file I found first.  When I go to edit the actual film Blu ray video will be used.  (I'm still planning all my sources out)

" Many Bothans Died to bring us this information" Scratch the Bothans Many died sounds better. If there is a paused kept in the space of Bothans it would also sound like she was talking about people she cared for with a hesitation before "Died"

Where does the central Hologram go in the middle of the scene? Oh I see that is where you re-cut it.

hmmm you will have to create a hologram then :) Perhaps a hologram of the Shuttle?