brimforge said:

hm, did you play "TIE Fighter" the video game?

I remember Emperor Palpatine gave a speech during the into:

"... soon Peace and Order will be restored throughout the galaxy."

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=puvD_FDS_jE

now take Obi-Wans "... the Jedi kinghts were the guardians of peace and justice in the old Republic ..."

maybe start with "Order and Justice" going to "now Peace is disturbed" over finishing "a/the defenseless planet Naboo" ?

just a suggestion to cut down the "peace" repeat and mirror what a Jedi and/or a Sith thinks about it ...

Interesting concept, though I wouldn't called Naboo "defenseless" since they do have their own fleet of Star Fighters...which we sadly never see again after the start of Episode 2.