if "Naboo" would be "Alderaan", I think "peaceful" or "pacifistic" is the better word (but too much "peace" in the text sounds awful)
That's exactly why I didn't want to use "peaceful" and "peace" in same part of the crawl.
Post #723475
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- G E Predator
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- The Unofficial Complete REVISITED SAGA Ideas and Random Discussion Thread
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- 22-Aug-2014, 10:45 AM