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brimforge
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The Unofficial Complete REVISITED SAGA Ideas and Random Discussion Thread
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22-Aug-2014, 9:42 AM

Bingowings said:


I don't think you need to mention it's Earth-like status, it's doesn't pertain to the plot.  Indeed in the current version Naboo is hollow and has an interior ocean which is a significant difference referenced in the plot.

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Inhabited just means people live there.

 That was my point, to tell the audience, this is a "living" planet, not like Hoth or other places, that hold no interest for humans

sure, if "Naboo" is to have special resources, this should be mentioned in the beginning, as to why "Trade Federation" is there ...

if "Naboo" would be "Alderaan", I think "peaceful" or "pacifistic" is the better word (but too much "peace" in the text sounds awful)