Zer0Squared said:

yoda-sama said:

Since you mention it, there were a couple of lines that struck me a little funny, I'll try to find some time to go through and pick them out.

Same here. I helped do the English subs for it and had to listen a couple of times at some words that you kind of rushed over quickly, but when I wasn't paying attention to the subs, it sounded great. :)

One of the things that kind of bothered me is having an apostrophe 'S' after the name John Williams. After researching it, I saw that it could be written and pronounced either way, but the majority showed that it should just be written as Williams' ...and pronounced just as his name sounds.

Also, there are small areas where there is a 'sucking in' sound when you breathe in that can probably be muted in the recording to help smooth things out. An example being at 5:45 between the words 'method' and 'used'.

At 6:08, when you pronounce 'aliasing', it should be with more of an 'S' sound instead of a 'Z' sound, with the emphasize just on the first syllable.

Otherwise, wow - great job!! Very smooth voice!

Thanks for the kind words. Yeah, just make a list of what's wrong and I can re-record them. I'll jot down what you've written here.