Bingowings said:
I can't play your crawl on this browser but the player generated a still which pointed out an error.
"Terrestrial" means pertaining to Earth so the sentence containing that word doesn't really make sense.
Naboo is Earth-like since it has more than one terrain, but I'm open to criticism and I can change the word no problem. Thing is I didn't want to use the word "peaceful" in the same part of the crawl as the word "peace."