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Post #719811

Author
Joshua_Blue
Parent topic
ANH:R - Stronger Vader edit: *** Released ***
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Date created
3-Aug-2014, 3:26 PM

Not a bad idea, I'll try that line.

Anyway, I think the scene works  even without the "This is the system line", but might be even better with the suggested additional line.

If it doesn't I can still just drop it, I do not think the debate over the tracking device is crucial. As mentioned, Lea already concludes that the ease of their escape was due to being let to by the Empire.