Hi! I have returned from a long, LONG absence.

I'd like to start off with a public apology for my childish behavior years ago. If you don't remember, it's best not to. If you do, I promise it won't happen again.

Now for my two cents in this forum. For a small start in contribution, the scene in Episode III with the medical droids telling Obi-Wan and Bail Organa that Padme is dying, I feel some of those lines should be removed. I think it would work better like this:

Droid - We are losing her.

Obi-Wan - She's dying?

Droid - We must operate quickly if we are to save the babies.

Bail - Babies?

Droid - She's carrying twins.

Simply remove the "lost the will to live" excuse and let the reason of her death be Anakin's Force Choke while she was in a delicate condition.

Also for Episode III, remove the "I'm so in love with you" scene between Anakin and Padme entirely. After Grievous' talk with Sidous, we cut right to Anakin's nightmare.

Don't know of Ady would consider this, but a reason to back-up Leia remembering what little she does about her real mother could be that while she lived on Alderaan, her adopted father showed her holographic images of her mother from when she served in the Republic Senate. It would similarly to the deleted second from "Episode II" when Padme talks about her childhood friends who died and Anakin sees moving images of them on the wall of her bedroom.