doubleKO said:

^^ You really should use shorter paragraphs if you want to hold the reader's attention. The web is different from printed media and needs to be broken up more often. Try to limit your paragraphs to five or six lines or split them up once they go over this length. Not picking on you, just offering a possible explanation for Dominic's reaction. Most people won't have a problem reading longer posts if they are structured with a little more 'breathing room'.

Thank you. I will bare that in mind in future.