Well, I read the story. Not going to give away any spoilers, just my opinion.
It's okay. Just okay. Not good, not bad, simply okay. Kinda dry, kinda boring, but okay nevertheless.
Truth be told, I'm just not interested in this side of the SW Universe. Aside from the tired, worn out "Jedi vs. Sith" BS, I prefer the supernatural/paranormal aspect of the universe; reading prose* about ordinary fighter pilots doing barrel rolls in B-wings ... well ... it simply doesn't catch my fancy all that much.
*These stories work better for me in comic book format.