I've gone back to the last entry and replaced the kiss between Anakin and Nashira with a hug. I figured it would work better to preserve the big brother/little sister dynamic and save the intimate, romantic moments between them for the sequel.
Post #712356
- Author
- DuracellEnergizer
- Parent topic
- Star Wars: The New Dawn (The First Episode in DuracellEnergizer's New PT Re-Write) *COMPLETE*
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/712356/action/topic#712356
- Date created
- 20-Jun-2014, 6:46 PM