Climactic clash of olde beardy and young curly would surely have painted a more pleasing picture for thy eyes had a single volcano been the locale? Too much in the way of wide net casting maketh the end of episode the third feel... impersonal. One planet with our heroes and villains spreadeth out across it perhaps? When the stories connecteth the excitement increaseth too, episode the sixth ably demonstrateth that at least!
Post #711759
- Author
- Olde Wan Kenobi
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- What Went Wrong/What Can Be Avoided Thread
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- Date created
- 16-Jun-2014, 6:41 PM