Updated it in ways more slight than anyone cares about. :) (link changed)
Added a wipe to remove the more egregious Dewback/Trooper clip: http://www.dailymotion.com/video/k6tzxOUvF1V0Mf88kMo
Spliced in Harmy's immaculate sentry bot-free search shot and tried to match color grading: http://www.dailymotion.com/video/k6sBrYPXo2n6iZ88kLq
Reproduced wipe to show droids outside without CGI dewback: http://www.dailymotion.com/video/k2UxgJOE0k5qCr88njC
Added burned-in Greedo subtitles that I think look decent. Nearly correct font, shadow, some blur: http://i.imgur.com/uP9YbHD.jpg
So aside from tweaking colors and contrast, I think it's how I want it. Nothing breathtaking here, but I'm learning a lot at least. Any comments or advice?