I'm not sure if you are planning on revealing the 2nd Death Star during the ESB scenes, or keeping it within the ROTJ section. However, you could cut from the Millennium Falcon's departure from the Rebel fleet and wipe to Vader arriving at the 2nd Death Star, but possibly have Palpatine already there, waiting in the throne room for Vader to come report to him? I don't know, just throwing some ideas in there.
Post #711425
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- oh_riginal
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- The Star Wars Mono-logy (a 3-in-1 OT Edit: hard drive failure ended the project)
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- 14-Jun-2014, 8:42 PM