I think it's improved, except for the addition of Zull's final line of dialogue. It was more effective to have Zull respond with silence. Unless you aren't planning on having Siri win over Zull, I think you should change it back.
Post #710901
- Author
- RicOlie_2
- Parent topic
- Star Wars: The New Dawn (The First Episode in DuracellEnergizer's New PT Re-Write) *COMPLETE*
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/710901/action/topic#710901
- Date created
- 12-Jun-2014, 10:32 AM