Personally, I am very happy with the higher resolution footage seen in the binoculars.

I do agree about the shield generator being a mess in terms of it's inconsistent location throughout the movie, same with the paths of the AT-ATs (not sure how much of that can be corrected, but maybe most of it can be in the 2nd half of the battle). The best suggestion I can think of is Ady actually draws himself a very rough sketch of a map showing (the best way he can determine) the layout of the most notable objects on/near the battlefield - entrance, some trenches, shield generator (and defense turret(s) next to it), the path of the AT-ATs - and from there carefully deciding what can be left as is or what needs to be adjusted in the footage. Sometimes having a visual reference can help when doing this kind of work. I wish him luck when patching up the glaring inconsistencies of the battle :)

I'm on the fence about the close-up of that AT-AT's head. In a way, darkening its window does help it look less like a miniature model imo, but judging the light, you would see more of a reflection on the glass window - maybe something inbetween? Not sure if we'd notice the drivers' heads in the cockpit from that perspective, but maybe.

Speaking of a close-up of an AT-AT's head, I'm curious to see how Ady might have improved that side-view shot of one with an AT-ST in the background. I wouldn't even be opposed if he discards it for something similar but more dynamic.