I've gone back and edited all prior entries in the script; beyond the requisite spelling corrections and minor rewordings, I've changed the colour of Siri's lightsaber from pink to fuschia, the burly Gungan mentioned in the early portion of the screenplay is now described as a "rephibian" than as a reptilian, and Force-sensitive Mandalorians are now clearly identified as Mandalorian Knights throughout the text.
Post #710122
- Author
- DuracellEnergizer
- Parent topic
- Star Wars: The New Dawn (The First Episode in DuracellEnergizer's New PT Re-Write) *COMPLETE*
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/710122/action/topic#710122
- Date created
- 8-Jun-2014, 3:32 AM