Well, I showed it yesterday and got some helpful feedback. I changed up some of the subtitles to clarify just what's going on with the Wookiees and tinkered with the audio levels. Feeling pretty good about it.
That's an interesting idea vis a vis the viewscreen shots, SilverWook. Maybe I'll look at some of the scenes again (pieced-together 'phone calls,' etc.) once I've got a better handle on the software.