I liked it. You introduced Palpatine, which has already been elected President of the Republic and he begins to pursue Skywalker, and the missions of the main characters: Obi-Wan, Darelda and 81 leaves to contact the leader of a group of Jedi, Nellith. And Anakin and Carima heading to Coruscant to contact with the resistance of the Republic.
I also liked when Anakin talks to the troops and says: "If you fail here, then you fail for the last time". He already begins to sound like Darth Vader in the OT ;).

Just a little question:
Could you put each episode on a different post?
It would be more comfortable to read the treatments and the scripts for each episode.

Great Job and i look foorward to see the next part ;)