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Post #701476

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Obi Benuubi
Parent topic
Star Wars Episode I The Phantom Menace Radical Re Edit (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
22-Apr-2014, 10:49 AM

The Fiery Editor said:

There is no main character, and 90% of all the characters are as bland and as monotone as ever. The one character which I liked was Qui Gon because he is sort of a father figure to Anakin.

It would be nice to say that the main character is Anakin, but he's introduced almost 45 minutes into the movie. Obi-Wan is also kind of like a brother figure to Anakin. You NEED to remove ALL the dialogue and/or scenes where Obi-Wan has his doubts about Anakin being the chosen one. It SHOULD appear as if both Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan think that he is the chose one.

You should also re-edit the Lightsaber battle to be slow, like the fight in Episode IV.