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Post #699175

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RicOlie_2
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Episode IV: A Ridiculous Hope
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7-Apr-2014, 7:56 PM

I'm not sure if you're already planning to, Frink, but you should drag out the last bit of the Battle of Yavin, from the time that the order to fire is given. Repeat the same lever-pulling and button-pushing scenes over and over again and extend the trench-run as much as you can, so as to increase tension. After the torpedoes go in, cut to various stormtroopers and random people throughout the Death Star (and of course, Obi-Wan still doing his thing with the tractor beams).