DuracellEnergizer said:
Reaching Metiya, the near-human woman brings her sword down on him, cleaving him in twain.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZXRb6nPcx10
;)
I'll admit that I haven't read through that much of this great undertaking, but your last paragraph seems remarkably violent, even for a post-ROTS Star Wars. I'm guessing you're gunning for the hard "R" with this.