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Post #694349

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DuracellEnergizer
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Star Wars: The New Dawn (The First Episode in DuracellEnergizer's New PT Re-Write) *COMPLETE*
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Date created
8-Mar-2014, 6:56 PM

Well, I gave it some thought, and I decided to shorten "The Infamous Scene".

The more gratuitous elements have been removed; instead of having to bear with the Mandalorian beating Zull and tearing at her clothes, it now cuts from the Mandalorian approaching Zull directly to the Force Hound standing outside her cell door listening to her screams.

It nows plays out as a more chilling counterpart to the scene in Star Wars where Vader enters Leia's cell on the Death Star with the torture droid, and -- hopefully -- it's now more in line with the tone and style of the OOT.