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Post #693328

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DuracellEnergizer
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Star Wars: The New Dawn (The First Episode in DuracellEnergizer's New PT Re-Write) *COMPLETE*
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Date created
2-Mar-2014, 3:46 PM

Well, I've hit a snag in the development of the script and entered a doldrums of sorts. 

Between where I am in the story right now -- with Anakin aware of his Force-sensitivity but Obi-Wan unwilling to train him -- and where I plan on going -- with Obi-Wan deciding to take Anakin from Tatooine and train him as a Jedi -- I don't know how to develop the story. I know I have to show Ben helping out around the farm, Anakin pestering him to know more about the Force and the Jedi, and so on, but I don't know how to flesh these elements out.

If anyone reading has any ideas of how I can explore this period in the story -- how Ben should come around to accepting Anakin as his apprentice, any sidestories between them and/or the other members of the Lars/Whitesun families -- I'd be grateful if you'd share them, 'cause I'm simply drawing blanks right now.