Haha! I suggest you fix the first one and leave the second one if you're going that way. The first just looks and sounds awkward....
Post #691752
- Author
- RicOlie_2
- Parent topic
- Star Wars: The New Dawn (The First Episode in DuracellEnergizer's New PT Re-Write) *COMPLETE*
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/691752/action/topic#691752
- Date created
- 22-Feb-2014, 6:00 PM