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Post #691737

Author
RicOlie_2
Parent topic
Star Wars: The New Dawn (The First Episode in DuracellEnergizer's New PT Re-Write) *COMPLETE*
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Date created
22-Feb-2014, 5:01 PM

DuracellEnergizer said:

SIRI: Still ... I can't help but to have a bad feeling about this.

ZULL: (cont'd) (subtitled) You've broke me.

 The nitpicker is back!;)

Are those grammatical errors intentional? I can see the second as being that way, but the first just looks like a mistake to me.