A question that someone else asked, but I'll restate it: Why is the "a" in the word "that" in "that can save her people" wonky? It looks like it's broken into two halves which are shifted away from each other. The letter "d" in custodian almost seems like it's similarly broken - the vertical bar looks a little too high? And I feel like I can "draw" an imaginary straight line between the two breaks...

Since you worked so long on this, I don't feel comfortable assuming that this was a mistake on your part, so are those the actual letterforms at that position in the crawl? Why would they be "broken up" like that?