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Originally posted by: Warbler
Starkiller great story so far, why does it skip from chapter 20 to 31?

I mis-typed. That should be '21'.

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]Originally posted by: sean wookie
are you posting this on fanfiction.net

I hadn't given that any though. I thought there were parts of it that weren't that good, where the main character seemed too 'god-like'.
Taking down a Krayt Dragon alone. Going one-on-one with Bail Organa and other heads of state. Attacking an ISD. That 'splattered grey matter' comment.
(Its better than it was. When I first wrote it, I instead of the 'plausible denial' bit about the satellite screwup, I actually had a part where the main character briefed the world on what was going on, with the help of the US Secretary of State. I thought parts of it were clunky and sometimes contradictory, so I removed it.)

Anyways, I'm happy that you guys like it. Perhaps I could post it at fanfiction.net, once I've gotten more of it completed.