Just a heads up: I've gone back and re-edited some of the earlier entries of my script.
In addition to a few minor corrections/alterations, the Radiant VII is now directly attacked by a pair of assault ships instead of a single dungeon ship, most of the dialogue between Ziyal D'ukat and the priestess Zull has been rewritten, I've added some more description to the battle between the Mandalorian boarding party and the Mistryl Shadow Guards, and I've changed the name of the second thug who attacks Siri.