oh_riginal said:
How about this exchange...?
Han: "It's gonna cost you something extra..."
Obi Wan: "I can give you 15,000 now... and TWO when we reach Alderaan."
Luke: "10,000??? We can almost buy our own ship for that!"
No, leave out Luke's answer. How about making it go something like this:
HAN: It's gonna cost you something extra...
OBI-WAN: I can give you fifteen thousand now, and two when we reach Alderaan.
HAN: Ten thousand. All in advance.