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Post #681917

Author
TM2YC
Parent topic
The Star Wars Mono-logy (a 3-in-1 OT Edit: hard drive failure ended the project)
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Date created
6-Jan-2014, 2:27 PM

One more idea!

Since you seem pretty hot on FX, the "Not this ship sister" scene could easily read as a post landing scene (Han taking off his gloves and the general debriefing-esque nature of the dialogue helps). If you added sound of the Falcons engines powering down a bit of Hoth base radio chatter and general hubbub in the background it would really sell it. But the difficult bit is you'd need to do this FX shot...

(^ a VERY quick mockup I did)