Will you be keeping Vader " "Set a course for the Hoth System?"
On the view screen you could swap the image of the shield generator for the planet hoth and have "That's it" also
But I think it does work reasonably well. although I thought the shot of the taun taun running in the base was a bit of a strange way to introduce the base.
How about a shot of the rebel looking through the binoculars and then showing the falcon flying like they spotted him?
Just a couple of ideas.