It still lacks timing, we need more "aww that's nice" stuff before we get to the "uh oh not good" stuff: before we mention the Special Editions we gotta make sure the viewer loves the O-OT as much as we do, so that when we present the SEs, he is pissed too. It's a good old documentary trick (as seen in "Roger and Me"). So I'll try to re-write the whole first part a.s.a.p., and post here.